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In 2101 we were thinking the war was over, but the nexus intruder program had programmed an sos system in an tank and fled to an cave, he started to build his system cores and rewriting itself. we were living peacefully, not nkowing nexus was out there.

19 years later
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we still living in peace but something was going on. computer systems failed, nasda systems included.
nasda was planning to send missles to every plase the project is active. so we cutted the power off,
tanks are schooting on us. we fled...

we started an war, but. not knowing who was attacking.



and? like it? :P i was just bored :D
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errorcoebin wrote:and? like it? :P i was just bored :D
When I'm bored, usually just think of a new storyline, never thought of writing it down....
It is nice, has that dramatic felling...
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KukY wrote:
errorcoebin wrote:and? like it? :P i was just bored :D
When I'm bored, usually just think of a new storyline, never thought of writing it down....
It is nice, has that dramatic felling...
thx, i created it in 30 min, or somthing like that. im going to create another one, bigger.

maybe i start a book :lol2:
can someone give me some idea's?
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post comment's and idea's plz :wink:
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errorcoebin: Let someone else do it, I.E. someone who has writing skills and add your ideas along the way. Wink.
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Storylines can be very interesting, especially regarding about the game.

A nice example can be all happenings before the colapse (years before), countries before and after the colapse, or fictional facts that leaded to the colapse (NO FLAME WARS, PLEASE!)

Or a fanfiction about people who try to survive after the nuclear holocaust, not those who created the Project, i'm talking about normal people that got no military involvement and must survive for themselves and avoid troubles with scavengers to prevent get killed later

Just giving an a idea, feel free to comment about that.

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Brainstorming new WZ story lines is surely much fun. :D

Going forward from there can lead to even more levels of fun, more levels of the game.

Here's an example of what I mean.


Storyline:

Dr. Reed uses Scavs.


Scenario:

Dr. Reed had a son, Jason, who was rendered a quadriplegic during his senior year at Cal Tech by a Neo-Luddite terrorist bomb. Using cutting-edge technology from the research arm of his multi-national company, Synaptics Inc., Dr. Reed made his son somewhat whole again and put him in charge of a top secret project set-up deep in the frozen tundra of the Russian Steppes, code named "Mangodai". The Nexus events of the original Campaign were part of Reed's "Plan A", the Mangodai, his "Plan B". (There was also a "Plan C" & "Plan D" but we'll leave those aspects of Dr. Reed's malevolent creativity for another occasion.)


An Actual Story:

Just one of endless ways of dramatizing the general "Storyline" and the more specific "Scenario". It is character driven and uses the power of mythos because those are central to my chosen yarn-spinning aesthetic for this effort.

As part of the aesthetic technique I use, Scavs refer to Cyborgs as "Mekka" and the Ultra Borged Jason Reed as "The Shinning One".

Part of the "Mangodai" mission is to open up a new front along the Gulf of Mexico and to enlist Scavs Tribes to create diversionary False Flags to squander Project resources and misdirect their attention from a southern geographic region that is rich in lost technology that could turn the tide of war and the very dominion over the planet's future.

And now the very short, but complete, story that brings the foregoing to life in but one of many ways.


"Mastan of the Scar - His Tale"

My life tale begins in the foothills I call home, a days journey from the waters of the Great Gulf, before the Mekka alliance that forged our first war ties with the order that came to be known to us all as the Mangodai, rumored in whispers to be a darker sect of Nexus from the Far East, across the great ocean, far north of the land of the Great Wall.

A Shiny One of Metal, with coal fire pits for eyes, had come to my tribes village, the Wing Clan of the Eastern Scav Nation, before the on set of our fiercest winter in a generation, in the 20th season after the darkest days of man.

Much was promised and some I saw before leaving to journey with my warrior brethren on my Trike, Badger Strike, to fight on the Northern Mountain Front, at the foothills of Greybeard.

Would that I had done otherwise, knowing as I do now that the cause was lost before it ever began. But in that thought I am a fool, for nothing could have changed the course we were all bound to follow.

I am known in my homeland as Mastan of the Scar. My woman calls me by my secret name, the name born of the Long Sight I possess, but that is between us and no other but the Elder Akbar, our tribes Seer. I think of her now as I nurse my wounds just before sunrise.

We have fought long and hard, my clan brothers shoulder to shoulder, drenched in each others blood.

There were moments of glory, a time all true warriors yearn to feel in their bone & sinew. Of that I have no regrets. The battles fought, even those lost, we strode with honor. That is the way of our Nation and all the Scav peoples.

But there was treachery in the words of The Shiny One, the Mekka who strode alone with eyes of cold death.

In doing his bidding I fear we lost much more than can ever be regained. A warrior's true heart can never be bought or sold like melons in the Seven Nations market bazaar, for it is honor itself and without honor all is lost.

Indeed, of that I am certain, as much I am that the flow of blood from my wounds has only been stayed but for a short while, enough though to wield my weapon again this day on my feet, in the thick of it, in the worst of death's pitiless march.

There are but a few of us left here at Greybeard's Pass on the red road to the High Plateau we call Crimson Mane.

We must guard this compound with our lives. So it has been commanded. For if we do not prevail it has also been promised ... that we will never see our home hearth fires again. In this I know there is no other course.

I, Mastan of the Scar, will fight till I am vanquished as will my warrior brethren, those few of us left.

But I too fear I will never again know the touch of my youngest yet in the cradle, my first son. That will be my deepest wound as we battle at break of day.

The sun rises now as I make final preparations on my Trike for this days blood letting. So few of us left. So many we must face.

We say our prayers to the ancestors, the grandmothers & grandfathers, the Great Mystery, in silence. All know what this days outcome will be but we shrug this heavy burden as if we were mighty giants and not mere blooded mortals.

Before I mount my Trike I turn and face my fellow Wing Clan Warriors, those few who will with me join in battle, perhaps our last.

I remember the words of some long ago warrior who once roamed the lands of our ancestors, the lands we would engage the enemy on this day.

The words seem fitting. This I said:

"Warriors of the Wing Clan, my brothers... the sun, Grandfather of our Nation, smiles upon us as we prepare to meet the Northern enemy.

I say to you, my fellow warriors...

It is a good day to die."

With those words hanging in the air like carrion birds awaiting a wounded boars last gasp, I turned, I ...Mastan of the Scar, and strode with shoulders squared, to my Trike and fired-up the engine, double-checked my weapon cache.

In short order, I signaled the procession forward. And for one last time I thought of my first son, whom I would likely never see again let alone teach the ways of a true Wing Clan warrior.

Then the fun can continue if you're up to it, like so -

In the virtual game world that is my "Aqua Co-op: SE & EE" this one of many, many, stories that will play-out. ;)

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Ok, i have an idea if you may be so kind as to read it...
A Passing Of Conscience wrote:.

As the cold blackness of the night settled over me, i felt a tinge of remorse... How long had i been doing this? killing innocents and destroying homes?
The pain in the back of my neck felt as if it were constantly burning, the synaptic link constantly overheated and voices floating in my head as if i were no longer entitled to my own...

for two years now i had walked in a daze, unable to control my actions yet fully aware of them... so many faces begging for mercy, and my soulless flesh and steel, sending them away in torrents of flame...
and now, as if someone had turned off a light, my body was once again mine... for so long i had been unable to walk, i had instantly fallen... i struggled for days to move, to find food and water, and only now can i stumble along under my own will... but the voices are still there...

"... You can still hear me?.. " one says "... we have much to do, so very much to do..."
the other, a mere crackling of radio signals, none receiving completely and none waiting for the other to finish...
and finally the last... my own...

How long had i been lost that now, my own thoughts seem foreign to me?

My arm, my... flamer... it feels so weighted... i will never be able to remove it, it can cause no good... and i am doomed to bear the mark of shame that is this steel and flesh body...

I am Darrius... Anti-infantary Flame Cyborg... And this... is my pain eternal...

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Roux Le Corps wrote:Ok, i have an idea if you may be so kind as to read it...

"A Passing Of Conscience"....

I get it. Well done. I would gladly read more if you posted. :D

- Regards, RV :ninja:

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wow, i think i got some ideas here.
im going to work.

and LOL! i got an rank now ^^

and bluemaxima,,, i know i do not have any writing skill's but im training to have them.
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here is an new one.
warzone 2120

in 2100 we started the project, for an new world. saver and better, we (team alpha) sought for old artifacts.
but we had trouble, the New Paradigm was active since the collapse.

soldier: collapse?
commander: yes, i will tel you about it later
soldier: ok...

the New Paradigm was doing the same, collecting artifacts.
is was an enemy, it was an struggeling battle, but we won.
we detected an virus in there systems, the Nexus Intruder program.
he deleted itself, leaving two files.
team beta send an distress signal and needed reinforcements.
team beta was under attack by the collective,
so. we...

Jacob: commander, are you still telling that old story again?
Commander: Jacob! long time no seen!
Jacob: i know, too long. but, i got some trouble.
*wisper**wisper*
Commander: what?!? that's not possible!
Comander: troops, your dismissed!
Soldier's: yes sir!

>to be continued<
it is a start :wink:
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I think you have the spark required to produce some good writing, but as BlueMaxima kindly stated you lack the skills in English such as grammar. If you'd like some assistance, I can go over your next piece of writing for you and make it somewhat more... Presentable?

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actually... this is fun, my turn ^_^
APoC...cont...
I raise myself against the darkness, trying to bear the pain from the synaptic link, and the pain of the voices, and begin to walk...
I hold no illusion that there is some plan in place to help me... that there are others like me... no, i watched as hundreds of other cyborgs like me fell as i did... and I was one of the only to stand back up, the only who's body didn't fail along with the machine...

"...come now, you can't truly believe that your alone?... ...We have each other, I can be your mind, and you my flesh!.."
that one voice, present over the top of all others was for the most part my only companion... his voice... mechanical and deliberate neither soothed my nerves nor made me feel nervous... it was strangely familiar yet i haven't heard it before...

Did the other cyborgs that stood again... did they hear these voices as well? did they have spots of memory from before they lost control? or was I truly alone? trapped with these thoughts and voices that never seem to stop, a shame that swirls inside my emotions and memory?

I guess I had been lost in the swirls of my madness for a long time... I had come upon a small city... it was clearly a scavenger haven, as the outer limits had warnings... both verbal and symbolic... 'wrong way go back', 'turn or die', and of course, impaled heads on sticks, that served as a warning to others...
such violence towards others... it's no wonder we haven't rebuilt... no surprise that only a few large factions have any real control...

And now I find myself wondering.... as I stumble into the city... which faction was I with? the Project? the New Paradigm?
or was I built to serve Nexus and Nexus alone?
"...what do you think?.." the voice says
"LEAVE ME ALONE!!!!!" I scream at the top of my lungs, my voice synthesizer nearly breaking from the strain of using my voice, after having not been activated for years...
I realize, that yelling was a bad idea... almost immediately i see scavengers crawling out of the buildings, brandishing their weapons and a few pulling out radios...

"...what are you waiting for? one burst of flame and you could destroy them ALL.."
I felt my turret arm loading, my air fuel readying for a fight... but i wasn't telling it to, once again i was loosing control...
"... Are you going to stand there? KILL THEM!!!!.."
The synaptic link was burning more intensely then ever before, ad my flamer arm was ready to fire, but thankfully, apart from micro controls, I could control myself, my turret stayed by my side as I continued to walk to the scavs.

To be continued...
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i know i not good at English, im normal dutch.
and, im just 13 and sitting on school.
and grammar, i got dyslexia. (im thinking it isn't the name for it, but the translator says it)
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well with all the piled against you, think you've got alot of talent ^_^
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